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Reading 09: Giving some feedback on fellow students!

 

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Hi everyone! 

This week's task is not as difficult to compare to the last few weeks as we only have to provide some feedback on other students' work. One thing that I found interesting is that we were given different people to give feedback on and I think that it is a good idea as we can read other people's work and can learn something from them as well. When it was my turn to give feedback, I tried not to be as helpful as I can without sounding too mean because all I want is to also help them improve their work while they are doing the same thing to me. I was also able to learn some writing techniques from other students. The feedback that I received was also very helpful and straightforward. I am also happy that there was not many changes that I had to do on my work and only added some few sentences to improve my work. I hope that I was able to give a helpful feedback to fellow students and improve their own work. 

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