Multimedia Development 1

  A Let's play image from Pinterest. Hi everyone!  This week's task is not as difficult to compare to the last few weeks as we only have to provide some feedback on other students' work. One thing that I found interesting is that we were given different people to give feedback on and I think that it is a good idea as we can read other people's work and can learn something from them as well. When it was my turn to give feedback, I tried not to be as helpful as I can without sounding too mean because all I want is to also help them improve their work while they are doing the same thing to me. I was also able to learn some writing techniques from other students. The feedback that I received was also very helpful and straightforward. I am also happy that there was not many changes that I had to do on my work and only added some few sentences to improve my work. I hope that I was able to give a helpful feedback to fellow students and improve their own work. 

A brainstorm I made from Miro For this week's tasks, we have to write our main introduction and conclusion of our chapters. I find it challenging as we will have to use the knowledge we have gathered from the research and writings we have done. I had to keep reading my work over and over again because I get distracted so easily. This is when brainstorming become useful to me as I was able to focus on my thoughts step by step! I decided to divide the introduction and conclusion intersect them with the body paragraphs that I have written for the past few weeks. After I read through my work, I then write the important bits that I found and create a statement from it. The videos from our website module were really helpful as I was able to write my introduction and conclusion properly. I also tried my best not to repeat words and information that has already been written but it was still a challenge for me because we must summarise the chapter with our own understanding to help the read