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Reading 07: Applying the Feedback

An image of a typewriter by Mylucie

We were given a task this week to review the annotated bibliographies of other students in our year and give them critical feedback at the end. It was interesting to read other student's work because everyone has a unique style of writing therefore it was nice to see how they talk about their topics. It also helped me to recognize what I was missing from my own work and what I needed to improve. For example, I need to include an introduction and a conclusion on each of my themes as I thought we only must write them after we have talked about the themes, however,  I found out that it is also a whole separate introduction and conclusion for the overall topic. I also have to recheck my citations and make sure that I reference my work correctly as well. 

I am also happy to get critical feedback from other students as it really helped me to organize and modify my work better. As you open the link above, you will see the texts I added in orange color which are the missing references, introduction, and conclusion that I did not add last week. I create a new document for this week as I think that it would be easier to find as the readers do not have to scroll down at the end of the document. I also based it on the feedback that I received this week which was extremely helpful to me!

Here is the link to my Annotated Bibliography for this week.

 

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  1. Livia AlencarMarch 16, 2021 at 9:17 PM

    Hi, Flosie!
    This weeks Reading task also helped me to recognize what I was doing wrong on my work and what I have to improve. I was doing it all wrong ~ sad.
    I had a quick read over your document and it is looking so nice and neat *-*
    Keep up with the the good work :D
    Lívia Alencar

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